The goal of my revision strategy is to rewrite my thesis. After reading my peer and professor review comments I realized my thesis was not as clear as I originally thought. The way I am going to fix this is by going through my essay and finding the main theme of my paper. I first … [Read more…]
Introduction Intro Sentence: Beauty has the power to capture emotions. Can beauty help us become better people—as individuals and as a society? Armstrong Philosopher and author Introduce “sense” vs “form” drives Beauty is the perfect balance Individuality behind beauty Use their versions of beauty to cope with the world around them Thesis: Although … [Read more…]
For my science based article I chose, “Laughter Brings Us Closer” by Jeff Wise. This article is from Discovery Magazine. My essay is about the beauty I find in happiness and laughter so this article will give me a lot of good information. The author Jeff Wise from Discovery is interviewing a woman named Sophie … [Read more…]
Beauty is such an interesting topic. Like Armstrong says, everyone has “very different tastes,” making beauty a spectrum rather than one specific idea. In my opinion, beauty is something that makes you feel an immense amount of joy. When someone tells me a funny joke or I am able to make someone laugh, that to … [Read more…]
